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More cutaways and close-ups
Light bulbs appear again somewhere or
dissolve in?
Too many pan lefts, perhaps reverse one?
Second 17 - sit down step shot: may be able
to tweak by zooming and colour
Cutaway tripod - second 27
Wobbly - second 45
Lots of filler John Lewis/tunnel
Different size shots
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