Website Feedback

Website Feedback

Straight away the first picture on the home screen is very professional, the artist is clearly comfortable on the camera bringing across the professionalism even more so. The title font of the artist name is very clean and stylised. I think the little message from the artist on the home screen, though cute, actually destroys the professionalism that is being built by everything else so far on the website. Maybe just have artist name big in the centre really establishing the brand and name. Transition between pages is a really nice touch. Navigation is simple and clear. The picture on the about page is brilliant and the effects on it bring more to the brand image, an edgy side to the beauty. Someone else writing the about page and then bringing in a quote from the artist makes it seem like there is a team behind the artist, a continuation of the professional feel of the artist and her approach to the industry. Music screen is perfect. Tour page completely breaks the websites theme, the grey image in the background filling the whole page unlike in the others where there is white borders. The text cannot be seen and the ticket buttons look tacky compared to the clean style across the rest of the website. Gallery aesthetic is really nice. Would maybe do another shoot to create a bit of variety within the gallery, the repeated photos focusing around the hand on the wall get a little bit boring. Want the whole gallery to be exciting and intriguing to look at not “oh look there’s that photo again with a slightly different angle”. Contact page is very professional. There isn’t a merch page? Is this a mishap or is there no merch from this artist? Merch would give the chance to extend the synergy of the brand being created for the artist.

Peer Feedback

Tori lorente – There wasn’t any continuity within font. In addition, the font on the tour is really hard to see, if you are going to try and sell tickets you need to be persuasive with bold font. I really like the album picture, make sure you use this synergy into the digipak and possibly the tour poster.

 

Tori – Missing a full stop at the end of the first box (After recent updates). Too many different fonts being used in the about page, try and stick to one font, otherwise it is difficult/annoying to read. Tour page writing can’t be read, the colour blends in with the background image. Nice gallery page, but there is an uneven amount of photos and it looks unprofessional, add another photo and remove the excess space at the bottom. Contact page has dots in the background where as the other pages do not, not much continuity, either change it to blank white like the rest, or add grey dots to the other pages. Score 6-10 Ben Griffiths

Can’t see tour dates. Really boring although looks nice. Tori Llorentes vocals are insane. Level 3

 

Home page on the website is a bit boring but I like the photo. I like the picture used on the about page but it is a bit plain and boring. Good music page. The picture you’ve used on the tour page means you cannot read the writing so I cannot see half of the writing. Good and unique gallery page but good have more photos. Overall I like the website although I think it is quite plain. Ella O

 

Clean photos on the website. Think the tour photo could be better and match the colours of the photo album. Layout is nice. Think the colour scheme could be better. Nice text.

 

Good first image that comes up as soon as you enter the website. The text in the first box could be a bit bigger and bolder as it doesn’t really stand out. The colour scheme is very basic and there isn’t much going on. The text on the about page is really small it needs to be bigger. The music page is good and the album cover is a nice photo. You cannot see the white font against the brown background on the tour section. The photos on each of the pages don’t match and they don’t have the same theme, the gallery photos don’t look very professional and there is not much synergy. It is very basic could be more interesting.

 

Home page is simple but really good, I like how you did a personal note on the front page and finished it with writing ‘T x’ which makes it seem personal. There could be more on the about page and use it as a biography so we could learn more about the artist. Add something to the music page. The tour page looks really good, but maybe you could change the colour of the font or make it bolder so that it would be easier to see. Gallery look really good.

 

I like the photos used and the filters which are used throughout to give the website a consistent theme. All the links work well and I like the font used. Also like the honeycomb collage of photos because it looks unique. However at points the website can be boring and not very engaging (the about section), maybe change the colour of some of the text, to make certain parts stand out more. Also text on the tour page isn’t visible enough to read due to blending into background and it also isn’t big enough to read clearly. Finally you could add a shop for merchandise.

 

I like the homepage – simplicity of colour + font fits the image of the artist. The photos are pretty and I like the effect on About header I like the hexagon shape of the photos on Gallery page - original About page: ‘woman’ instead of ‘women’ Hard to read tour dates because of photo – text needs to stand out more Need more information about artist e.g. current playlist, Youtube videos Level 3 – 8 By Angel

 

6, - I find the website quite bland as there is little writing and little going on, doesn’t catch my eye, Cannot see the tour dates as the font is the same colour as the background, I do like the photos and font as it makes the site more clean and crisp

 

7Cannot see the tour dates on tour page, More photos and colour, Font flows well throughout and Great about page.

 

Cant read any of the tour dates, Not that many pictures in the gallery, No link to merchandise on the website, effects on pictures are good, website a bit bland, like the fonts, gallery shown in a interesting way. 5/10

 

7 - The images on all of the links work well, on the tour link the text is difficult to read on the left hand side of the page. Maybe put a colour behind it so it stands out. The social media links (facebook, youtube and soundcloud) don’t work at the bottom of the page, they only go to the wix pages so just link that to your own. All the links at the top of the page work and look good, the colour scheme works well with the artist. Maybe ad in a merch shop as well. By Charlie

 

On the tour page it is quite hard to see the writing as the background is black and white, I do love the photo on the background though. I do like the photos in the gallery however i feel like there need to be lots more in order to create a personality for the artist. Also you need to give the photos a title as when you click on them it comes up with what they're saved as 'IMG_5855' so this would make it much more professional. I love the contact me page as it looks very professional however you could add a lightbox to pop up on the screen to make it more interesting. Overall I love the quality of the photos and the different ones on each background, you need to add a store with merch though so that fans can promote the artist. I would rate this an 8/10. Clare

 

“Therefore, since living around London this is when Tori began to write and compose music about her childhood and the lifestyle she used to have.” This sentence doesn’t make sense on the about page. Not sure the black and white image on the tour page matches the images on the other links? As all them pictures are quite soft focus. Also hard to read the writing on the image as it blends in with the background. No clear links to her social media websites? However, overall I feel a real personality comes through on the website as a sweet, innocent young lady – if that was what you was going for? Overall I would mark the website 6 marks as it still needs improvements. Kelsey

 

Really liked the images, good quality- look professional! ( Level 3), the layout is a little repetitve and mainly includes text and an image (Level 2), Good synergy, colours represent artist ( Level 3), however, it is easily forgettable.. .Needs to stand out more! Also, on the tour page.. you can't see the text as the image hides it (Level 1) But overall, good :)

 

Level 3 - LOVEEEEE the close up pics they look peng. Nice group of different pictures all together and the page gives off a homely vibe. However its still quite bare so thats the reason for not giving level 4 - Millie