Feedback on Hold Me Down Music Video - 1st Draft

WWW	EBI
Close up shots are nice	Lighting should go on longer
Blinking shots are amazing	Too much blackout
Hylands House shots are great	Not enough colour in the middle
End section is really good	Don’t get mise en scene
Weird editing is great	No apparent meaning
Good lip syncing	Hook of artist changes too much
Like house shots and shiny wall	Red & Blue infrared doesn’t fit
Trippy light bit is good	Lights seem irrelevant at beginning
Effects on beat drops are good	Subway doesn’t fit
Like the performance shots	Don’t like worms eye view shots
Really like when she sings “hold me down” and screen moves	Light projection near the end ruins the quality of the good light effect
Edited really well	Material is a bit random
	Too many outfit changes
	Too much singing
	Don’t get the colour stuff
	Thought beats need improvement
	Studio shots are too long
	Couple of framings could be improved
	Not sure on overlay at start
	Too many flickers
	Some lip syncing out
	Not sure on Hylands House
	Abrupt ending
	Shots don’t match
	A lot of random colours