Sunday, 11 December 2016

Hold Me Down 1st Draft Feedback

Strengths:

Awesome variety of shot sizes

Great styling of Alicia

Lovely locations - indoor and out
I really like the urban vibe and think it matches the style of the song well.
I love the red effect
I like Alicia's vulnerability - she performs really well and is a very credible artist. Her lipsyncing is good.
Editing is really good - I really like the thought beats and the flashes.
Downsides:
The pace of the video is too slow - I like the slowness at the start, but then I lose interest.
I wish the concept of the 'street shot' would develop
There is no climax, so nothing to build to

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